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    dots Submission Name: these endearsdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    dotsthese endearsdots
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    not in a million years
    not after a million tears
    will i ever have a fear
    that you could hear
    and as i whisper these endears
    your mind is no where near
    the world around me clears
    and i cheer as you disappear




    Submitted on 2009-03-19 02:59:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow i loved this so short and to teh point that is harder to do then people realize i cant wait to look up some more of your stuff
    | Posted on 2009-03-19 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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