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    dots Submission Name: For Youdots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 474
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    dotsFor Youdots
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    Its all because of you
    I try so hard
    Its all for you
    When I get so far
    But then I sacrafice myself
    And hit rock bottom
    Just so I could lose
    This haunting phantom
    Cuz I cannot fear
    These ghosts I run from
    Although I hear it in my mind
    Just like a pounding war drum
    And I wait for the day
    When you will come
    And we finally reach
    Our final stardumb
    Its all for you
    When I do this
    I know you'll understand
    Though you may get pissed
    But I understand your madness
    Just like I understand your sadness
    Knowing that wont be our last carres
    Thats my only request




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