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    dots Submission Name: Forever And a Day!dots
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    Author: Blackphoenix14
    ASL Info:    16/male/AR
    Elite Ratio:    1.51 - 20/71/54
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 108
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    dotsForever And a Day!dots
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    You are my description of love
    You are my description of a friend
    You are my description of everything
    You are my description of beginning to end

    You have put me on a pedestal
    You make me feel 10 feet tall
    You've always been there for me
    You've loved me through it all

    You've stood by me through thick and thin
    You've always been patient and kind
    Just thought I'd let you know
    You're the owner of this heart of mine

    So you ask how long I'll love you
    Well this is what I have to say
    Past, present, future, ALWAYS
    FOREVER AND A DAY!




    Submitted on 2009-03-20 10:29:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it but i feel as though your (elite)skills are just gonna grow more and more youre finding your voice and its awesome
    | Posted on 2009-09-14 00:00:00 | by ghad | [ Reply to This ]
      speaking volumes, nice poem
    | Posted on 2009-03-21 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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