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    dots Submission Name: A PLACE TO GO dots
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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 617
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsA PLACE TO GO dots
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    First spring rains
    With them comes inspiration
    A sort of serenity
    Clarity really
    I long for canvas
    For deep shades of purples and blues
    I did it once
    Before my hands trembles so
    Most details were lost amongst the colors
    Lost behind the rampant brush stokes
    It was mine though
    My crashing waves
    My little house
    It collects dust somewhere now
    Forgotten
    Like its creator




    Submitted on 2009-03-20 19:55:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow... this one's very sad... I honestly doubt you are truly forgoten, someone always remembers you, in some way or another.
    | Posted on 2009-03-21 00:00:00 | by Plegias | [ Reply to This ]


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