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    dots Submission Name: across this roomdots
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    Author: tricklingrain
    Elite Ratio:    5.22 - 23/17/13
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsacross this roomdots
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    I'm here
    head crooked in my arms
    with my friends chitting away
    their mouths are moving
    but I can't here a thing
    I'm sitting away from you guys
    in my own world
    acting calm and serene
    but not really working

    You're there
    thumbs hooked around loose fabric
    with your friends poking fun
    their mouths are moving
    but I can't hear a thing
    You're leaning against the wall
    continuing to joke

    Are you acting?
    to be present?
    I want you to notice me
    No, need you
    to give me a chance
    to prove that I love you
    even if you don't

    Can you see me?
    or do you try not to?

    because I'm here
    waiting
    across this room




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