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    dots Submission Name: love abscondeddots
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    Author: joy7542
    Elite Ratio:    5.03 - 1034/952/203
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotslove abscondeddots
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    you turned
    not caring to wake me,
    you crawled out of bed
    making noiseless thoughts, movements
    sending my dreams spiraling

    out of control.

    blinking lights can’t stop you
    as you drive faster
    to get away from the scene...
    you walked out the door leaving me

    dying.

    my emotions were splattered
    across the painted walls,
    pieces of love and time were laying
    on the wooden floors...
    I am drowning

    in you.

    my breaths are deep
    and longing, my dreams are further
    than you could ever see...
    but it’s all in vain,
    I will awaken and be

    empty.




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