thanks but this poem is not about me..most of my poems aren't. ItI create based on an emotion I want the reader to feel..n i take it from there. This is however, extracted from one of Thoreau's poems and the white butterflies signifies the soul leaving the body. He uses it in one of his poems.
It is a very good poem but... your rhyme is off and... well, it's just not me, the rhyme scheme, but I do like your poem, please keep up the excelent work and... i hope you recover well from this poem's meaning.