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    dots Submission Name: scarydots
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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Open your angel eyes wide
    donít get lost in the lavender sky
    shake all the stars from your hair
    taste your sweet, salty, bitter skin
    cut the poison from your tongue
    donít sleep beneath the candy acid sun
    please donít follow the fairy dust

    Donít sleep to heavy in your cherry blossom bed
    peel the razor peddles from your skin
    donít get lost in the fairy dust
    donít look at the fairy
    donít look at the fairy
    that fairies not pretty
    she's ugly, evil and deadly
    are you still dying
    are you still dying

    Peddle red peddle blue, kill the fairy end the doom
    peddle red peddle blue, the girl power will save you
    peddle red peddle blue, if your crazy then so am I
    are you still dying in the fairy dust
    are you still dying
    are you still dying
    kill the fairy




    Submitted on 2009-03-21 19:22:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I see what you are saying that the most appealing things are the most dangerous and the people you love the most can end up in a life that is conrolled by such eil. But also beauty is vain unless followed by a caring an compassionate heart. But you could have picked a different way to say it. I think a rhyme scheme would have greatly benefitted you here. but all in all an ok poem. And I don't want to push myself upon you but I do want to get to know you, but it's your call oh and is that your real pic?
    | Posted on 2009-03-27 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]
      It started out ok, but ended kind of clichť' like.
    | Posted on 2009-03-25 00:00:00 | by BestxDeceptions | [ Reply to This ]


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