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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 332
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    This thought comes almost everyday,
    We have become close friends as we were one in the same.
    Then soon enough it will be the end I cry almost every minute
    So much pain, so much hurt
    My feelings and memories are like a hurricane.
    I'm alone, scared during this storm and as the tears run down my face .
    Seems like there is no way in stopping the intolerable emotions, pain, and frustration that the world puts upon my shoulders.
    I hear no birds singing their joyful songs or the laughter of young children being able to enjoy life without a care.
    It just seems like death has been and will be around me anyway.
    So no matter what you try say,
    Suicide is the only way out for me.
    It's been way to long since someone has held me tight and said that they love me and that they need me.
    It's been to long since I have had someone to protect me,
    But you have never been able to see
    In reality what has been happening inside of me.
    You may ask and look concerned wanting to know why I cry,
    But do you really want to that I wish for me to die?
    Can you handle the truth,
    Can you handle the pain I have felt and dealt with by myself for many years?
    When I see myself in the mirror,
    I can't see the joy I once felt.
    That joy has been taken away since I can remember
    I just turn my head as quick as possible for I do not want see what I'm actually trying to hide.
    Suicide?
    The quickest way to solve my problems once I'm gone
    But will they really be solved or will they become a burden to those I still love but don't love me?
    Time is the only one who can really tell us.
    In the end will you miss me after I have cried my last tears?





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      I can feel the lost, the frustration and the pain within this word youíve poured. Depression. a disconnection from the world with no one to lend you a hand and bring you back. The feeling of sinking deeper in to the lonely darkness with sorrow eating away until you are left with nothing to exist. The sound of a once flourishing heart that dance wildly now beets slowly as it tries to find maybe a glimmer of light but is slowly torn away. I can say Iíve been there and I can say Iíve felt your pain but with such a pain these will only seem like words. Sometimes there is no one that can us so we have to learn to get up and fight for our self and only ourselves and if you then find the confidence, then reach out and give someone else confidence. In turn you will only grow stronger. Sometimes you pove death itself wrong instead of giving only what it wants

    Faid
    | Posted on 2009-03-22 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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