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    dots Submission Name: What we all desire (a quote by me)dots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
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    dotsWhat we all desire (a quote by me)dots
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    Our greatest desire is to love and be loved. Without love, we are nothing and have no purpose; but we have someone who loves us, even if we have never met them. If we didn't, we would all be dead. We love ourselves and those around us, weather it is plutonic or true, and we keep each other going all the day and all our lives through.




    Submitted on 2009-03-21 23:40:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey Man when you put it that way it like the world seems less lonely. Strong quote , lots of depth.
    Your second line Knocked it out of the park for me.
    Keep it up. Haha
    | Posted on 2009-03-24 00:00:00 | by wordyb | [ Reply to This ]


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