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my fantasy...

Author: Myrrh
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for dear MC

my fantasy...

BTW did i mention i love you.

my fantasy is to see a genuine cheery smile on your face

my fantasy is to fulfil the promises

to tell you that you are the only man i am capable of loving

to assure you that you are the one who has stolen my heart and i don't want it back

that you are my love, my ache and my dream.

my fantasy is to leave a part of me near you when you are asleep

that part what we call warmth, prayer and concern...

please, don't forget me.

Submitted on 2009-03-22 06:22:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  bmw. yes. poe
| Posted on 2009-03-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  beautiful it is simple brash an bold it tells how much a girl should love a guy
| Posted on 2009-03-22 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]

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