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Drowning


Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77 /57 /29
Words: 97
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 846
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 612



Description:



Drowning


So many emotions
So many reactions
So much to handle
What do I do
Please someone help
Im drowning
I can't breathe
I am lost in a sea of my own emotions
I cant get out
I dont even know where an escape is
I feel so vunerable
I am going to die
The guilt is killing me
The anger is driving me mad
The love is weighing me down
The depression is overwhelming
I need help
I cant swim by myself
Im getting tired
Im going to drown
I cant keep my head overwater
Im drow-




Submitted on 2009-03-22 19:36:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I was going to say a certain part of this I liked. But I like it all.
| Posted on 2011-02-12 00:00:00 | by Undead37 | [ Reply to This ]
  Amazing.... Thats all i can even say...
Nice work!

~Sara :)
| Posted on 2010-02-16 00:00:00 | by WhoKnows | [ Reply to This ]
  i wish i had bunches of comments on all my poems... i love it... message me
| Posted on 2009-11-14 00:00:00 | by xxLive4lovexx | [ Reply to This ]
  you're right. and that is a really good poem i love it
| Posted on 2009-09-15 00:00:00 | by StainedxBlades | [ Reply to This ]
  I can actually relate. Thats how I was last year but it kind of drained away.
| Posted on 2009-03-24 00:00:00 | by wolfgurl830 | [ Reply to This ]
  full of richness , speaking of one's self, emotional rollercoaster, great poem
| Posted on 2009-03-23 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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