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    dots Submission Name: Betrayaldots
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    Author: LoStDr3aM3R
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
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    dotsBetrayaldots
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    I see you there in front of me,
    your face,your hands your eyes.
    I here you talk i here you tell,
    your hopes, your dreams, your lies.

    I walked with you a sunlit trail,
    together hand in hand.
    Then twilight came an you were gone,
    an now alone i stand.

    The woods are cold,
    the trees are black ,
    the dark is closing in.
    And you have gone away from me,
    your faultless light has dimmed.

    Betrayal is an empty space,
    raw night, cold room, alone,
    An no one can redeem your face,
    sweet knight, safe light, your gone.




    Submitted on 2009-03-22 22:51:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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