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    dots Submission Name: LIFT YOUR EYES TO JESUSdots
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    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Religious
    Total Views: 572
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 822



    Description:
       The viruses in the song are talking,
    only the course part is singing in the song


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    dotsLIFT YOUR EYES TO JESUSdots
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    (V.1) In your times of trouble and trials,
    when everything seems to go so wrong:
    when it seems that no one care for,
    all you can do is look up to Jesus.

    (V.2) Turn your eyes to Jesus,
    for he is always there:
    he will never leave or forsake you,
    he loves you even when no one elce seems to care.

    (V.3) Open your heart to Jesus,
    he will welcome you in:
    he doesn`t care who you are or what you`ve done,
    he has no respect of person,
    he is waiting for you to come in.

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    Lift your eyes to Jesus,
    for he is one who always cares:
    he is waiting for who soever
    will call upon his name,
    he loves each and everyone:
    he will never turn anyone away.





    Submitted on 2009-03-23 00:11:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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