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    dots Submission Name: Equilliliamdots
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    Author: longwinterdays
    ASL Info:    21/F/WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 204/190/64
    Words: 155
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 821
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 924



    Description:
       Yeah, I figure the only one that will understand this is actually Mandykins, but I thought that I would post it anyway. Pretty cool song if I do say so myself. It was created at about 4 a.m. off of a word called "Equilliliam". Yeah, it's supposed to be equilibrium, but that isn't what rolled off of my tongue that night.


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    dotsEquilliliamdots
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    we stand together now/among the trees and moss aplenty/ time to breathe in now/look around don't let it all blend on me

    We got lost on our way/ took the path less traveled and sought/ went after those so called "dreams"/ it back fired but that desire finally caught

    chorus:
    We got that equilliliam kind of love/ that wake up in the morning share your night over coffee kind of love/ maybe it's the frosting, maybe the marshmallows, who knows/all i know is I need this equilliliam kind of love

    We listened to the words you lied/ the ones you uttered to our soul/ no more staring at your ghosts/ you take that dead fruit outta our bowl

    We do this for ourselves/ no more putting our love aside/ our hearts have spoken all along/ begging for our selfishness to subside, to just abide and take this joyous ride 'cause....(chorus)




    Submitted on 2009-03-23 00:23:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i love it.
    ahah.

    come home now.
    | Posted on 2009-03-23 00:00:00 | by desolateheart | [ Reply to This ]


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