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    dots Submission Name: Where there is Life there is Hope.dots
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    Author: Joachim
    ASL Info:    75 Male RSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.39 - 361/264/178
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 653
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       Well we all have this little poem barely alive hoping on revival hoping for attention. Take heart little Zero. Joachim/ Steve Walter


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    dotsWhere there is Life there is Hope.dots
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    I found a poem
    lying broken on the sidewalk
    its heart still beating
    I picked it up
    delicately
    like a fledgling
    warm in cupped hands
    I took it home
    fed it gently
    hoping that one day
    it might fly.




    Submitted on 2009-03-23 06:05:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love the creative nature and the karma feel of this poem.

    It's captures the innocence of one's thoughts, kneaded with maturity to know life isn't about holding anyone back,rather wanting them to grow to their maximum potential.
    | Posted on 2009-04-05 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Ag my moeder... hoe oulike een is hierdie.... Love how you depict something that has potential... and only requires a littlie bit of attention and tender love and care to make it grow and flourish... love it!!!

    well written... brilliant poetry!
    | Posted on 2009-04-03 00:00:00 | by Beulah | [ Reply to This ]
      His eye is on the sparrow. It wasn't time for it to die. He sent you to address its needs. You the kind one to heal a wound . All of us at times, in some unrealised moment are called upon to do His will. Hope lies on the sidewalk of life wounded by nonfaith until a healer picks it up and gives it faith to renew itslf.
    | Posted on 2009-03-23 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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