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    dots Submission Name: The Tear Collectordots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsThe Tear Collectordots
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    The Tear Collector

    Tears they fall, sometimes bless-ed
    In their burning
    Watered reminders of a hearts capacity
    To connect emotions
    Soft welling they sting
    And find their language of wet lashes
    Run their courses
    As ancient rivers carve their way
    Through stone barriers

    Tears collected vanish in vanquished aches
    Evaporate to silence
    Leaving their mark, their fragrance
    Breathed in the molecules dispersed
    Cut to the edges of wishes
    Images of longing
    Hearts slowly breaking in two
    Still holds you
    Weep for you
    I do

    Behind the hard choke rasping and sobs
    Moans sniffling for a beauty
    Both found and lost
    Delivered Jesus to red rimmed eyes
    That see beyond and into the sanctity of pain
    It cried; I; not for myself
    But for you, for her, the rest of the world
    Broken by innocence
    And ignorance

    The heaving heavy chest digs its well of sadness
    In slow counted beats of blood
    Grief for love
    With these sickles gouged deeper to the flaws
    And spread their knowing further
    Into the fathoms of your soul
    Tears; the reflections of venerated smiles
    Become the augury of responses
    Of sight pierces the darkest, fallen pool

    Tears; the written messages of sorrow and laughter
    Covert their collection of sacrifices
    And fall bless-ed humane
    The merciful and pitiable denizens
    Of a stronger more courageous face than Gods
    They beat with the bravery of flesh
    More holy; than heavens sacred
    Have these tears
    For more sure they are in their tactile salt
    Are these tears
    Have lived

    And in your tears a more profound betterment exists
    More, much more of life
    Stronger
    Braver
    And more courageous
    To face their own existence
    Than the pretence of their presence
    In God











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