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    dots Submission Name: Soul of Beautydots
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    Author: col13x
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsSoul of Beautydots
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    Soul of Beauty

    Through the dirt and grime of centuries
    Bloody carnage of hate and fickle fate
    In mediocre destinies
    With shattered and reviled dreams
    It came creeping

    From the tears of lovers
    Left to weep with graves
    From the stories and legends
    Of hearts bitter revenge
    Struggling to rise

    Floating in the carbon toxic
    And the filth of monoxide stench
    Rallying with the scream of cinder burnt
    Atomic rising sun wastelands
    Ever straining

    Cringing and cowering by pilloried hands
    Slapped back to the slavery
    The chains of abuse still hanging
    Bare and bleeding their spiritual noose
    It lifted up

    In wretched and ravaged cries of torture
    The prostituted life of raped soul
    In the stinking and festering pits
    In concrete caves of darkest eyes
    A quiet cry
    With misguided faith
    And fear filled thoughts
    With the drudgery of time
    And its wasted philosophies come to nought
    To be recognised

    All terror and anguish
    Delivered to a single inescapable point
    Of useless and overburdened hope
    To heavens repentant angel of death
    And be free

    Trammelled by its own steel shod hypocrisy
    Flayed by its lies and deceit
    Whipped to the post of progress
    And entertainments release

    At last released

    With a felon grin
    And wrenching sadness
    Pleading eyes
    And with wistful smiles




    It came creeping
    Struggling to rise
    Ever straining
    It lifted up
    A quiet cry
    To be recognised
    And be free
    At last released

    The soul of beauty

    The heart of mankind

    The spirit of love






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