OK, es sucks balls sometimes..I swore I commented on this here??
in any case I *LOVE* this one, I'm not sure I should love it so much, as the pain and backstory is apparent, but it's still an amazing write.
The little bopeep theme was perfect && added a morbid edge I'm not sure it could have got any other way- this was exceptionally poetic as well, most of your writing is either a decent mix or lyrical first and poetic second. All 3 are good, just worth mentioning here =]
I love the undertone of rage here too, it's not simply telling a story or sharing a regret but pointing out how messed up the entire thing was-
like I said, I love this one =]
&& of course, I love you <3
A great write! though i was kind of confused with the two words "mawled" and "lye", were they purposely put there? i was thinking that she was mauled by sheep, but i could be wrong. there is wisdom in every write and im not sure i understand the begining of it. Not the actual meaning but why it was written like that.
But after that it was written beautifully, i like how you used Little BoPeep.
It was acutally creepy, now everytime i read that story to my siblings ill think of the sheep attacking her .
Poor little bopeep she was lonely and now shes even more.