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    Author: RafaelaJames
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    Words: 172
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    Making people feel guilty is its game.
    Giving people pain is it’s life long goal.
    Its name is Guilt, and it crossed my way.
    It made me feel horrible.
    I can’t sow my happiness among all feelings,
    but I can show my pain.
    I hate my life and love drives me insane.
    So I’m sorry for I liked you so much and it pains me to leave,
    but I need to go away for life with me pushes natural limits,
    and people get pressured into doing things they’ll soon regret,
    but my love for you .
    I know you’ll soon forget.
    For guilt will follow me, right on my tail.
    Without you my eyes and
    soul are emotionless and numb
    from liquored rain that falls between
    the cracks of shattered glass of my life
    in the first place when what I thought
    was love was actually
    shameful flirtations and
    lusty evaluations…




    Submitted on 2009-03-24 17:00:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Aw. There is some really deep feeling behind this: a lot of hurt, anger, hate. Of course, there's the original love that started it all, but has been buried under the avalanche of despair. You need to clear away that despair and dig for that love again. Then, you'll find happiness.


    Honestly, the poem itself is a bit of a generic woe is me type thing. It's not bad, it's just not my type of poem. 'Course, I'm really not much of a poet myself...so *waves hand dismissively*


    Thanks for the write, it was a great read.


    May your day be filled to the brim with rainbows!

    <3 Sweets
    | Posted on 2009-03-24 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]



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