[censored] what the others say do not ever chance a thought in its purest that is what is meant to be said and portrayed if they don't get it [censored] em. poem to me seems that for something to change face in your life needs to something and exact like a knife into a balloon. so that you can help your relations like that of the fence you speak of. (good or bad) i think bad but to each his/her own. the watch you refers to time and regime, break that and youll be free(so they say) its seems to me as if your trying to be yourself the best you can with your expressions and trying so hard for people to get where your coming from... let yourself loose and youll will see over time that you are closely related to others more than you think
Hmm . . . I don't understand this. I like how you flow from thought to thought. The "carve into a balloon . . . " - to me it seems like a comment on how fragile life is. And the "building fences . . . dual perspective" seems like a comment on how we are different people with different people and how we don't really show who we are . . . or some sort schizophrenic thing . . . . And the knife with the wooden handle - suicide? And the final part "watch . . . " is the part I understand. You break the watch - time stops and now you can rome free type thing, dreamy. It's cool. But I don't really understand the whole thing as a whole. Very well written though. It's like each line could be a different poem. Cool stuff.
I'm not going to pretend I am completely with you on this but the first line did pop out at me as a good analogy of pushing limits. Maybe you could expand on that somehow I'm not sure but there is definatley potential there. It seems very fragmented at the moment but still it's more interesting that a lot of stuff around here! I'd like to see this in a more concentrated state so if you do then please update me.