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    dots Submission Name: What to hide?dots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Why should you hide something from me?
    I won't tell a soul, and certainly not three!
    If you have a thing to say, i urge you to do so,
    And not fill me of doubt and of sorrowful woe.
    Go on, speak your mind, I judge none!
    Besides, instead of listening to me, hadn't You rather get it done?
    But if you insist that nothing shall be said,
    Well, that's okay, the speech can be "dead".
    If it "dies", however, it will never go away,
    And its position will certainly not sway.
    Your thought will haunt you for the rest of your life,
    So why not say it, and leave out the strife?
    I will not push you, i will not shove,
    I'm just tyring to tell you of my love.
    It could be plutonic, it could be true,
    But that all depends on what lies in you.




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      This is the true woe of conversation, and very true for one expressing once self. If no one could express feelings or give such a statement they will surly betaken by the emptiness that will haunt and follow after words. Truly there is relief for those who do and can express themselves. I do like this poem, it was well thought out and there was a good use of vocabulary keep up the good work.


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    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by faideddarkness | [ Reply to This ]


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