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    dots Submission Name: What do you call it...dots

    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 310
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWhat do you call it...dots

    What do you call it when you feel all warm inside?
    Does it have to do with that beauty that walks by with graceful stride?

    What do you call it when you feel all hot?
    When you feel like harming something, though you should not?

    What do you call it when you feel cold and blue?
    Would it have something to do with when you're not in your usual mood?

    What do you call it when you feel just right?
    When you feel forgiveness and are away from the dark night?

    What do you call it when you feel unlawfully harmed?
    Could it have something to do with a suttle alarm?

    What do you call it when your mind is black?
    Would it have something to do with the sadness you don't lack?

    What do you call it when you feel like there is a happy end?
    Could it not be false be true, my very good friend?

    What do you call it when you can rest at last?
    And you can forget all about your truobled past?

    What do you call it when you come back anew?
    When your troubles are gone and you feel good too?

    I call it love,
    I call it hate,
    I call it sadness,
    I call it glee,
    I call it betrayal,
    I call it depression,
    I call it hope,
    I call it death,
    I call it rebirth,
    And I'm out of breath!

    All these things you know all to well!
    The human emotions they are, and almost like a spell.
    All these things are not all bad, you know.
    Each of these are not curses, not even death's close.
    All these things are blessing we can use easily every day,
    But be careful how you use them, for they do cause dismay!

    Submitted on 2009-03-25 13:11:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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