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    dots Submission Name: Depressingdots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 492
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    Description:
       I've never really understood, on here is the biggest place so far, why poets seem to feel the need to be so depressed and blue or black! People, I know from first hand experience that we NEED to move on from tragedies of any sort! It is easier said than done, I will back you up there, but we need out of the loop or we'll get nowhere! I did it and I am a whole lot less strong, in many forms, than most people that have great potential to write happily on here. A rut, my friends, is not a wise place to be!


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    dotsDepressingdots
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    Why must you all be so depressing?
    Can you thing of no glee? Are you just obsessing?
    You need to think happily, or life is a pit!
    At this rate, you shan't be able to escape from it!
    Leave behind sad tales of eternal woe,
    Lest you be pulled in to that pit, the one of infinite sorrow!
    Don't be miserable, don't be sad,
    About all these things and troubles that you have had!
    Look to the future, with bright, clear eyes!
    If you do not, then your sorrow will be your demise!




    Submitted on 2009-03-25 13:46:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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