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    dots Submission Name: Don' t Give it awaydots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
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    dotsDon' t Give it awaydots
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    Why is it people just can't let it go. People hurt people because they have no reason to.When somtimes someone says somthing mean they just have to reply back. And when they get in trouble they say" what am i suppose to let them talk to me like that?" Yeah let them talk about you like that IGNORE THEM. They obviously are so jealous of you if they keep talking about you.That means your someone with a special somthing. Leave your anger. Get a fish or a stuffed animal. It always work or youll get your self or someone else hurt. Its easy for me to forgive in forget like pie. I wish I could teach people that.But that wouldnt be life.




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      I feel the same , but move on to brighter adventure. well written , but emotional at some points. it speaks out , Bravo
    | Posted on 2009-03-26 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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