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    dots Submission Name: I Needed youdots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
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    dotsI Needed youdots
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    Where were you when all I could do was cry? You said youd always be there
    So where were you when
    I drank too much to kill the pain
    I needed you
    But where were you when
    I was lost and noone could help me?
    I needed you
    but where were you when
    I took all the pills I could find
    I needed you
    But where were you
    When the razor went too deep
    I needed you
    But where were you
    I needed you, but it's too late now
    I'm gone and you cant help me now
    I needed you
    But you werent here
    So now I'm where I'll NEVER need you again..




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