It All Ended With A Kiss -------------------------------------------
I can do nothing but sit and watch
As my world falls apart
As my heart is shattered
As my life fades away
You said you loved me
And that you'd never leave
You promised you'd never hurt me
So all of this I'd belive
I said "ignorance is bliss"
As it ended with a kiss
Wow! This poem was truly powerful. I loved the way you set off all of his promises to you within the context of an ugly breakup. It really highlights the way we can still cling to ideal wishes even when everything is going to [censored].
Submission Name: It All Ended With A Kiss
