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    dots Submission Name: the fifth...dots
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    Author: suicidalacts72
    ASL Info:    20/f/WI
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 189/150/69
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 641
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       fri. will be five years since my mom passed away...


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    that time of year
    when the dead rise
    beauty at its fullest
    decay swept away
    off the bone
    cold and alone she lay
    on a bed of gravel
    left the remains
    on the shards of love
    left overs
    they fade
    the worms will come
    flesh dissolved
    forever gone from me
    the fifth year
    a mothers love lost
    not forgotten
    but tears can't fall
    by the fifth
    your stone
    erroded and fragile
    left waiting
    in silence
    to only dive yourself
    completely insane
    is the pain over?
    NEVER
    forever is longer then i thought
    in the next life
    will we meet?
    nothing compares to a mothers love
    except hers
    so much more
    then it should be
    this comfort
    this serenity
    will i ever feel home
    or alive again
    should i just let go
    the world
    a ball, a circle
    endless
    move on
    help i scream
    into the nothingness of my soul
    forsaken
    damaged
    never to love again
    my life giver gone
    is my life?
    the glitter faded
    all too soon
    left behind
    consumed
    the fifth
    a knife
    collided inside
    deep within
    under the skin
    beneath the muscles
    my heart
    broken
    save me
    or not
    too late...
    this dark space
    tormented
    the breaking point
    my fifth
    i sleep...




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      wow.. so usually i read poems along these lines and i give after a few lines. it's so difficult to find a writer that can portray these emotions without it sounding like a 14 year old girls self-hate journal of woe. this, on the other hand, was stunning. it kept me reading until the last time. this was a fantastic piece of writing on your part. very deep, very well worded, very beautiful. thanks.
    | Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ]
      sorry to hear that hun the poem was very emotional it reminded me of my own pain lomming around the courner the 29th of april will be my sons 2 year old birthday and i havnt seen him since he was 6 months good poem though i hope you continue to wright
    | Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by darkonesgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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