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    dots Submission Name: MY DISORDERdots
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    Author: RITZ
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    dotsMY DISORDERdots
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    THEY CALL IT A “DISORDER” I CALL IT AN ESCAPE TO BE FREE FROM THE LIFE YOU LIVE ALL THEY EVER ASK ABOUT YOUR “DISORDER” IS DOES IT HURT AND WE ANSWER NO ALL WE FEEL IS THE PAIN THATS MAKING US CUT. THEY THINK IM CRAZY WHEN ALL I SEE IS THAT MY ANGER AND SADNESS DISAPEARS IT MAY LOOK PAINFUL BUT IF YOU LOOK PAST THE SCARS THEN YOU SEE THE REAL HAPPINESS IN MY CUTTING MY FREEDON FROM IT ALL. EVERY TIME I CUT IS FOR THE PAIN MY WHOLE FAMILY IS GOING THROUGH AND WHAT IM GOING THROUGH BUT NO ONE SEEMS TO CARE THAT IM CUTTING AGAIN AND MORE DEEPER AND IN PLACES THAT ARE EASILY HIDDEN. MY “DISORDER” IS NEVER GOING TO GO AWAY INTEL I MAKE IT GO AWAY OR I MAKE MYSELF GO AWAY.




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