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    dots Submission Name: Dear Kennydots

    Author: bubble_popper15
    ASL Info:    17, f, confused
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 201/127/45
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       I usually don't use names in my poems, but in this one I had to. This is kind of my final thoughts to my ex-boyfriend. I need some sort of closure, and he hasn't given me that. Maybe by writing this letter, it will give me some.

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    dotsDear Kennydots

    <u>I'm making a stand.</u>

    I thought things would never be okay. I thought that I wasn't strong enough to get over the hurt, the pain, the heartache.

    I guess I was wrong.

    Seeing you now has little to no effect on me. It's like before we started dating. Used to, I was scared to even think about when we were together. It doesn't even bother me now.

    I've actually got a life.

    Now that I'm not bound by you, I'm beginning to see things more clearly. I can actually notice when people are looking at me. And, I'm not afraid to look back. Guys are looking at me, and my self-esteem has never been better.

    I'm not afraid to hide.

    You can't play those dirty mind tricks with me anymore. I'm not your prisoner. You will not get to me anymore.

    I'm better than that.

    I will love you no more,

    Submitted on 2009-03-27 13:21:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      woah. nice one. really like this letter. and i think its a really good way for closure. i like the fact that this letter indicates that you are strong and well kinda inspirational actually
    | Posted on 2009-03-29 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]

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