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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    26/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.27 - 63/298/259
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 673
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    theres no place to hide
    you found the me deep inside
    the one who was afraid to live
    you brought me back im alive again
    the mask falls away
    im naked in front of you
    all thats left is the hero who died
    now he lives again
    theres no-more pain
    just love and joy everyday
    lets take the plunge
    fall together
    you and me forever
    you took my pain
    stopped the rain
    my heart is open again
    all my dreams are coming true
    cause now i have you
    im finally at peace and free




    Submitted on 2009-03-28 00:54:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Pretty good... but too happy if you ask me.
    | Posted on 2009-03-28 00:00:00 | by nothingness | [ Reply to This ]


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