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    dots Submission Name: I Want to Lovedots
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    Author: Doublefeather
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 71/61/33
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI Want to Lovedots
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    I want to love,
    With no pain,
    No hurt,
    Just freely be able to give my heart,
    To whom ever I choose,
    And that they would accept it,
    Why can't this be?
    Somebody listen to me!
    I want love without rules!
    Obligations!
    Or pain!
    Please make it so God,
    But it can't be like that can it?
    True love comes at a price,
    And unless I am willing to pay it,
    It will not be,
    For me it is patience,
    But cannot someone understand?!
    Do I mean little?
    Am I not allowed to have love when I want to?
    Can I not love without any adversity?
    The answer is no,
    Because true love is tested to its limit,
    And is made stronger for it,
    Then I know now I will have to wait,
    To endure,
    To hold fast,
    Until my it's my time to love.




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    ||| Comments |||
      coincidentally i was just talking to my friend about this term 'love'. what i think is that love does not come with pain or hurt. its the rejection, the confusion, the lies and deceit that makes the term love tarnished from its true meaning.

    and do you mean you are paying for true love with patience? well if you do, i think im kinda doing the same thing. no use rushing into love and it all goes wrong right? BUT urh its so easier said than done >.<

    and i like this poem alot cos i feel almost kinda the same way. Especially:
    "Just freely be able to give my heart,
    To whom ever I choose,
    And that they would accept it,"

    ^_^
    | Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      Good! It is open and straight- forward. I am sorry but love does not come without pain but that pain is worth suffering for the final and ultimate bliss of life. i agree with your conclusions and wish the best for you.
    | Posted on 2009-03-29 00:00:00 | by Myrrh | [ Reply to This ]


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