Broken friendship
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about bein left behind by someone that means alot to u
Broken friendship
Our friendship looked so joyful now it appears doubtful it upsets you when you see me with your friends it upsets me when I see you with my friends But now I see the truth I now know that you were never my friend You just acted like it so you could use me Now I am afraid to open up to a guy like that again I am afraid to get backstabbed again I do not want to go through the pain again I have not recovered from you It angers me when I think of how much I trusted you I can not get my friends to see the truth about you For I do not want them to go through this pain to It is almost unbearable But I know one day you will get your pay back By far you are the hardest friend to let go so far I hope that if you come back too me I will have the strength to say ' no' to you Because I do not want to be hurt again It amazes me how I felt so close to you in only one year I learned so much about you and you about me This is one thing that is going to take a while to put in the past It is painful to look at you if only for two seconds Because I want to run up to you and hug you To talk to you To tell you that everything is going to be okay For you to forgive me and me to forgive you Because I trully do miss you You are always on my mind no matter what time I want to make up for everything We were as close as two friends could be without going out But then you fell in love and left me behind |
Submitted on 2009-03-28 20:25:16 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| This really speaks to me it is a very emotional and realistic poem and I think that a lot of people could relate to this poem in some way and it can also make people open their eyes to realise they may lose someone they care for. However there is a few grammatical errors such as 'backstabbed again'. But overall the poem is vey good. Emma | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by PhoenixHope | [ Reply to This ] | I am afraid to get backstabbed again | _mayb u should say stabbed in the back insted_ By far you are the hardest friend to let go so far _idk if u ment to be the far at the end or not but it kinda messes the flow up a lil mayb u should take it out_ other then that i dont think i saw anythin wrong with it. i liked the topic and u really expressed ur feelings well. this was verey well writen.. keep up the good work _tayla_ | Posted on 2009-04-10 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ] | |
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