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Shadows, Tears and Memories

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 130
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Shadows, Tears and Memories

Empty hollow shadow
Follow me.
I need comforting and company.
Stay with me till i sleep.
Be there when i wake.
I will rest my eyes now,
and try hard not to break.

Salty cold tears
Rationalize my fears.
I need comforting and company.
Stay with me in this darkness.
Be there when the light finally comes.
I will hang my head now,
and try hard not to break.

Haunting Bittersweet memories.
Be my dreams.
I need comforting and company.
Stay with me through my sadness.
Be there when i find the strength to smile.
I will lay down now,
and try hard not to break.

When i wake.
When i look up.
When i smile.

i pray that i,
will be looking into your eyes.

Submitted on 2009-03-29 08:07:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Your tears and memories will only make you a stronger person. I can relate to how you feel because this poem reminds me of what i went thru with my ex gf in 06. Because with her I felt like I was invincible. But the day she walked out is when I thought I lost myself. I was depressed and thought I wouldn't be able to move on. and i felt like my tears were useless.

good work and this helped me to realize its not good to run frum ur past but to deal with it

Josh Brooks


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