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Corridors


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Corridors



I woke from a dream last night,
I was searching through a house
of sliding doors and patterned walls
Never ending corridors and ticking clocks
Heart in one hand, map in the other
Blood dripped a path behind me
But still every step i took,
seemed to take an eternity.

Lock me up for insanity
I can't seem to find the exit
One corridor leads to another
Screams of my pain echo
And it's you I'm trying to find
It's your heart that belongs next to mine.




Submitted on 2009-03-29 08:09:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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