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    dots Submission Name: That Special Guydots
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    Author: longwinterdays
    ASL Info:    21/F/WA
    Elite Ratio:    4.99 - 204/190/64
    Words: 295
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 817
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    Bytes: 1611



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       Read the whole thing, it's actually kinda humorous. HeHeHe


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    dotsThat Special Guydots
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    It's an incredible experience that first time a guy looks at you with his deep dwelling eyes that are literally a window down into his soul. Those gorgeous hazel orbs saying things that he can't yet say and you know that your heart is completely captured forever.

    Or when you wake up out of a slumber so deep that you are hardly coherent and all you can wrap your mind around is that you are concerned that he may already be up waiting for you and you are wasting that precious time that you could be having with him. Because all you want to do is spend every waking minute with him.

    Maybe it's the humbling experience that you get every time you hear him talk about his day. Whether it be about him being with his buddies all day or just listening to him babble on about what he ate.

    All I know is that the first time he ran up to me and grasped me in that most amazing embrace and all that he uttered was, "I love you", my heart was no longer my own or available for any other guy to take ahold of.
    So, I'll let you know now that I really hope that you don't fall for me because you have the biggest competion in the world. I'm sorry guys....since the day that I laid eyes on him, my heart has belonged to the sweetest, most honest, caring and humble guy that I have ever met. That guy with the hazel eyes is the only one that has stolen my heart...

    ....That guy is my world....My little guy....my nephew.
    Hehehehe. He really is my world. Who were you thinking I was talking about? Shame, shame.




    Submitted on 2009-03-29 14:22:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       someone dear in your life right now, strong feelings , sort of shy, great poem
    | Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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