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    dots Submission Name: New lifedots
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    Author: JonInk
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 6/11/8
    Words: 333
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsNew lifedots
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    I'm changing my attitude
    I'm saving all gratitude
    My acoustic blues
    As a personal news
    A way to vent
    Was my intent
    It's time well spent
    New eyes on this place
    A future with an old face
    Settling on my last grace
    My life has new meaning
    On the edge of the world; leaning




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