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    dots Submission Name: Love at first sightdots
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    Author: nomad knight
    Elite Ratio:    6.66 - 110/75/41
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       This is the first love poem I have written in a very very long time. To be honest I am afraid to call my affection for this girl "love" but i'm not sure how long I can deny it. As the poem lays out, I'm helplessly head over heels despite knowing full well the danger i'm in. I fear the currents shall wreck me upon the rocks.

    I try to resist but seeing her literally right now across the room as i write this has my heart quicken and that anxious joy reach new peaks. Lord help me.

    As for the poem, i'm a little concerned that it may be to verbose at times. Any suggestions or comments at all are very much appreciated.


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    dotsLove at first sightdots
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    Love at first sight I thought a fairy tale
    Come from minds that vain ideal hopes romanced
    Then I saw your face in a house of ale
    My heart stilled in awe, my soul stared entranced
    In defiance I thought myself secure
    Yet your beautiful eyes melt resistance
    My longing heart dreams you to be the cure
    Dreaming us togeather in consistence
    No more can I steer my heart from the helm
    The currents are pulling my heart to thee
    Powerful waves of passion overwhelm
    The ice has melted, the ocean is free
    In cold darkness you are my wamth and light
    Inspireing dreams that bring lost delight




    Submitted on 2009-03-30 07:02:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think you are two left feet.

    Love at first sight; I thought a fairy tale.
    Came from minds that vain ideals romanced
    I saw your face inside a house of ale
    My still heart awed, my soul stared back entranced
    | Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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