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    dots Submission Name: Betrayaldots
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    Author: JoJoCrab
    Elite Ratio:    1.06 - 338/113/129
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 230
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    A defeat I can't bare witness
    I should have known
    The king signed a peace treaty with the enemy
    Politics behind our backs
    Chancellor's participation
    His engagement cost us dearly this war
    Poison the king's mind for serenity
    Our enemies have won
    I renounce service to the king
    Nobleman I am
    A mercenary life I will live
    Payments is my services
    Death is thy drink
    May the spirits keep me away?
    From a nation of ignorance





    Submitted on 2009-03-30 12:13:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow.....i loved it... sounds like the beginning of a story... you know the stories that star out at the end a flashback scene
    | Posted on 2009-04-13 00:00:00 | by divineevilness | [ Reply to This ]
      very good poem. it really felt like some warrior was writing this in his diary.. jus too good.
    | Posted on 2009-04-04 00:00:00 | by rsujith | [ Reply to This ]
      I see the story of your poem play inside my head. Really amazing :D
    | Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by Toosha | [ Reply to This ]
      mamn i cant help but to think of some of your poetry as a movie like the words the action would be a great movie you write the words my friend ill direct it together we shall make an great movie, lol
    | Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]



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