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Artful Lies..(I wish...)

Author: Maranne
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This was also an assignment for my Creative Writing class, it was also under the theme, "Artful Lying."

Artful Lies..(I wish...)

I wish I could remember seeing my biological mother before I was adopted. I wish my life was more enjoyable. I wish I had known then, what I know now, which is in fact, nothing. I wish I had gotten lost at Epcot in Disney World. I wish I could fit my entire fist in my mouth like I heard Obama can. Oh, how I wish I could break windows just by screaming, if so, I would have broken every window in my house. I wish I never lost my two best friends. I wish wearing black can make a person happy, like smiling often does. I wish I could get lost in complete and utter darkness, and never find the light-switch. If walls could talk, I wish they would tell me the truth.

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