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I beg for more

Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 103
Class/Type: Poetry /Cutting or Mutilation
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I beg for more

Never have I felt this pain before.
It's something new. Something real.

It went so deep, I didn't expect it.
I didn't think it did at first.
Then I started to bleed.

I bled for so long.
I didn't think it'd stop. I was scared.

I was suprised to love the pain.
It's addicting. So I did it a few more times.

Pretty soon I couldn't stop.
My whole forearm is full.
I started on my inner thigh.
And then my hips.

But all these cuts don't
satisfy me. I need more.

I beg for more.

Submitted on 2009-03-30 13:35:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you are feeling pain inside yourself, a reflection of hurt , you expressing feelings in this poem , take life with ease , good poem keep writing
| Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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