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The Door Pt.1

Author: SamiScream
ASL Info:    16/F/SD
Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 17 /14 /11
Words: 45
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The Door Pt.1


There's a tapping
On the door.

I started for
The door.

But a tiny
Voice in my
head said "no."

I don't know
what to do.

I'm curious....

I'm scared...

Should I
Open it?

Submitted on 2009-03-30 13:37:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very mystic , short , but direct to the point , imagination good , who is the person at the door? that is the question
| Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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