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Flying With My Love

Author: PhantomRose
ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43 /58 /35
Words: 151
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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More like a wish really. I don't have anyone like this, but hey, a girl can hope right?

Flying With My Love

Love hath no shame
And hell hath no fury
So don't worry about me, dear
There's no need to hurry
Just take my hand, love
Let's fly away
You're in my arms now
And that's where you'll stay
We'll soar over the clouds
And across the moon
We'll leave civilization behind,
We'll reach the ocean soon
Then we'll swim with the fishes
Under the sea
Alongside the sharks
All happy and free
Down to the abyss
Where the glowing fish dwell
Together we'll swim
And life will be swell
No more sorrow
And no more hate
We'll live forever happy
We'll even stay up late
That will be the perfect end
To our perfect day
So lay you down with me, dear
I've got one thing left to say:
"I love you, babe,
With all my heart,
And nothing in the world
Could ever keep us apart."

Submitted on 2009-03-30 20:54:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Aww this was so sweet and written very well.
It's too bad you don't have anyone to give this to. It really is a wonderful feeling, unrealistic as it is. lol Oh well you'll fid your one and only some day.
Keep up the awesome work!

| Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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