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    dots Submission Name: Hopelessly Hopingdots
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    Author: PhantomRose
    ASL Info:    19/F/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 43/58/35
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsHopelessly Hopingdots
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    I'm hoping something good will happen
    That a better world will form
    And hate will cease to exist
    I'm hoplessly hoping
    I'm hoping people won't jusge someone just by looking at them
    That the only tears ever shed are tears of happyness
    And love will once againg be true
    I'm hopelessly hoping
    I'm hoping wars will no longer be fought
    That enemies can be friends
    And those friendships never end
    I'm hopelessly hoping
    I'm hoping no one will ever feel the need to feel self-consious
    That suicide will become a word of old
    And everyone will be happy
    I'm hopelessly hoping.....
    But this hope will never die
    Even though it is hopeless.
    Perhaps one day it will no longer be hopeless
    But until then,
    I'm still hopelessly hoping...




    Submitted on 2009-03-30 21:13:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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