| *shoot*||| Posted on 2009-10-29 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ] || i loved this one!||| Posted on 2009-04-11 00:00:00 | by blackbird | [ Reply to This ] || Jase is that you???|
|| Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by annie0888 | [ Reply to This ] || CTRL + and that should zoom in on the page, CTRL - zoom out, and CTRL 0 back to default settings. hehehe||| Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ] || from a distance, with the brain fitting in the missing pieces, this looks like s america or a very thin africa,|
and since sibliant fricatives are most common in the khoisan languages of africa, i was momentarily distracted.
i think however, that you have been just giving your words more space to show them to best effect.
it was worth reading them. actually i would have delighted in them even if you had not arranged them this way.
( perhaps it was a determined effort on your part to eliminate meanderings from myopic old biddies)
fortunately my eyesight at this distance is fine thank you(!)
and i am with Daniel on this one, in that it does sound lovely if you read it without dwelling on it too deeply.
i think many of us have those glossed over weekends and some too, hear those dischordant instruments in our heads from time to time. i have too many of those 'if only' moments ..should any be bliss? on reflection, probably not.
do your roadies make 'sibliance checks' these days?
|| Posted on 2009-03-31 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ] || I don't think I'll squint too long at this.|
I think I know it already,
but did not put it half so well.
It has the harmony of disjointedness,
it has the ring of lovely sound--
and it is.
|| Posted on 2009-03-30 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ] |