The Jewel Box

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The Jewel Box

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No one ever really grows up just bit by bit as time goes on joining ranks with those thoughted grown offering empty coffee cup to you as eager hungry pup eager to follow not your own with sense of being not alone, never ever really grown up. As time will swing its way around and haunt you to your very soul when you thought you walked safer ground, harbouring that which you'd not found, memories dream those days of old reminding you life has its toll.

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