Quiet Desperations by BenCollier

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Author:	BenCollier
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Words:	143

Class/Type:	Poetry/Religious
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If you truly want peace in your life then this poem is a start. Don't deny the prize He died for.

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I seek a silver lining, wanting for the truth,
My dreams and aspirations
Are denied for no proof
The shame of my sorrow, consistent of my pride
Forsaken His favor
I turn to His guide

Quiet Desperation
I suffer I deny
The promise of His healing
I’m broken deep inside
Jesus you’re my Savoir
Welcome in my life
Lead me and I’ll follow
Your name be glorified

Persistence of my struggle, fight it to the end,
Your gift is true salvation
My will I do bend
For every task I take on, every life I touch
Your victory is patterned
God thank you so much

Quiet Desperation
I suffer and I deny
The promise of His healing
I’m broken deep inside
Jesus you’re my Savoir
Welcome in my life
Lead me and I’ll follow
Your name be glorified

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Well said. I do so much love coming across poetry passionately in relationship with Christ. And this is a terrific example. I can tell from this that you have gotten some maturity and humility and as you said, peace.
Thanks for Sharing.
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