Guardian Angel by SickOfHurting U

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Submission Name: Guardian Angel dots

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Author:	SickOfHurting U
ASL Info:	17/f
Elite Ratio:	4.9 - 104/72/28
Words:	195

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	106
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	877

Description:
worte it for school, and sent it into a contest.. hope u like... i won the contest i sent this into..yaya im so happy lol

Guardian Angel dots

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As the gates of Heaven open
Angles spread their wings
The people of earth start to cry
But not for the reasons you may think.

When God took you from us Dad
He knew what a wondrous treasure you were
And looking upon you, he decided
He needed you in heaven.

Yes there were moments of pure weakness and sadness
But we rejoiced in the happiness you found
So when I have a day where I need you, or think
I can’t make it without you.
I know you’re at peace.

I look up and feel the raindrops you send my way,
And know you’ll carry me along.

Because you’re my guardian angel Dad
I know I won’t fall
As long as you’re by my side I know I can make it
Through it all.

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  touching piece. really touching. This piece made me think Of what its like to have the memory or even as you put it a father to be your gardiun angel. began to cry while reading this because I personaly hav no Iea ho my father is and to even have amemory of a father would have been somthing I would charish. I know I sound pathetic but its hard for me to not epose my feelings when read something like this.

O and gratz on wining that contest this piece deservse it.

justin
| Posted on 2009-11-06 00:00:00 | by Sepheroth432 | [ Reply to This ]
  reminds me of how i feel about my abuelo(which means grandpa in spanish). i can really relate to this! awesome work if i say so myself.

oh, congrats on winning!

-aaron
| Posted on 2009-10-01 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]
  It wasn't "Annabel Lee". It wasn't "The Raven". But it was beautiful. Honestly, I had to bite my lip to keep from crying. And what's more is it's original, at least the way I read it. Great job, Tayla.

Slainte,

DW
| Posted on 2009-04-17 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]
  This was really heartfelt and precious! We all need a guardian angel, and you can bet your Dad is guarding you day and night and watching with all his love and soul.
| Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Oh wow, I very nearly started to cry. It's honest and beautiful, and as pure as a poem from the heart should be.

Yours,

Iffy
| Posted on 2009-04-01 00:00:00 | by Iffy | [ Reply to This ]

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