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    dots Submission Name: Reason To Livedots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 217
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsReason To Livedots
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    I try to find a reason to live
    Not a single reason can I give
    I try my best to think of one
    All I ever come up with is none

    Someone tell me whats the reason
    Then maybe it's just the season
    Maybe things will change real soon
    or maybe just pop like a balloon

    I spend my life just helping out
    But when its done I'm without
    Without someone to help me through
    Usually not so much as thank you

    I help them out, they turn their back
    They never even cut me any slack
    A little appreciation would be nice
    A simple thank you would suffice

    I guess its just not destined to be
    I help them out they just forget me
    Maybe next time I wont be there
    Then they'll know I really did care

    I wish that I could make them see
    what their indifference does to me
    I makes me not want to help anymore
    But thats not what this life is for

    There'd be no reason for war and strife
    If everyone just helped in life
    No more hunger, loneliness or despair
    Just to know theres someone to care

    But alas thats not to be
    Too many people only care about ME




    Submitted on 2009-03-31 23:57:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you are right, nowadays, most people only care about themselves and their own little world.
    but not everyone...some of us are still around to help and care for our friends and families.
    i think some of us have done all we could to help someone...then got nothing, not even a thnx in return. but at least you have the knowledge you were there in a time of need.
    i can feel the despair in this one...but don't give up...there is some decency left in humainity.

    i love the raw truth and the way you openly bare your soul in your writing...keep it up Dean!
    your friend,
    michelle xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    | Posted on 2009-04-07 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I'am truely sorry your hurt but when your deep in despair
    we can change the humand race one human at a time just keep the faith
    and
    i'll be your friend when times get rough
    and hope that is enough
    and I loved your expression of love and fear
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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