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    dots Submission Name: unattainable lovedots
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    Author: rosealiehale
    ASL Info:    22/F/Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    1.65 - 72/39/25
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Haiku/Broken
    Total Views: 743
    Average Vote:    3.5000
    Bytes: 102



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    dotsunattainable lovedots
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    Everthing to me

    Strong feelings escape my soul

    Love has shone it`s face.




    Submitted on 2009-04-01 08:00:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very good keep it up
    | Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by nightfang | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Nice. I like it.

    I have no idea who Adam Lambert is but the haiku is very nice.
    | Posted on 2009-05-21 00:00:00 | by SuperMonkey | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry. I wasn't mocking you.....'love has shone its face' I was being cynical.

    I don't like to be 'helpful' unless someone asks because I believe poetry is meant to be individual...I prefer just complimenting :)
    | Posted on 2009-04-05 00:00:00 | by BanSidhe | [ Reply to This ]
      Poor you..
    I like your description
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by BanSidhe | [ Reply to This ]
      simple , affectionate , comes from the heart , an energy release from your inner soul , an understandable point of motion , very good poem , keep writing
    | Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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