unattainable love by rosealiehale

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Submission Name: unattainable love dots

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Author:	rosealiehale
ASL Info:	22/F/Las Vegas
Elite Ratio:	1.65 - 72/39/25
Words:	15

Class/Type:	Haiku/Broken
Total Views:	743
Average Vote:	3.5000
Bytes:	102

Description:

unattainable love dots

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Everthing to me

Strong feelings escape my soul

Love has shone it`s face.

Submitted on 2009-04-01 08:00:14 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very good keep it up
| Posted on 2010-05-06 00:00:00 | by nightfang | [ Reply to This ]
  Very Nice. I like it.

I have no idea who Adam Lambert is but the haiku is very nice.
| Posted on 2009-05-21 00:00:00 | by SuperMonkey | [ Reply to This ]
  Sorry. I wasn't mocking you.....'love has shone its face' I was being cynical.

I don't like to be 'helpful' unless someone asks because I believe poetry is meant to be individual...I prefer just complimenting :)
| Posted on 2009-04-05 00:00:00 | by BanSidhe | [ Reply to This ]
  Poor you..
I like your description
| Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by BanSidhe | [ Reply to This ]
  simple , affectionate , comes from the heart , an energy release from your inner soul , an understandable point of motion , very good poem , keep writing
| Posted on 2009-04-02 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.